Free verse

I hide away myself like there's something left to save
I don't think I can do this anymore it's way too dark ahead
I can't follow in your footsteps, the trail is way to hard to blaze
I'm sorry that I let you down and I couldn't be who I should be
I wish on every star that I could be something more than I am
I seem to always come up short and I guess I know why
It's because I don't feel like myself without you
I feel like a lesser version of me
There is something that has been taken and no way to get it back
I guess I'll just have to deal, not being who I could be

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I can't follow in your footsteps
the trail is way too hard to blaze.
Nice write.

[rnuff]

pondering intriguing write

[Craba]

such solid emotion through out, nicely done