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Out before me I see a wide and long way
Glowing with a warmth if innumerable depth
You and I could be happy someday
But I am just too scared to step
They journey wouldn't be easy
But we would make it there together
The thought of that first step makes me queasy
An I may just be stuck here forever
For the last time I watch the gate close
A small part of me gives up and dies
My mentality jumps to morose
The bile in my throat starts to rise
I had one shot to make this right
Turning away I take one more glance
I won't get any sleep tonight
I know I missed my only chance

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Craba]

i like this, yes it does. very well written and poetic. Nicely written