Blind life

Blind life

A Poem by new worlds last thought
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Its the thought from changing from a child into a teen. when everyone thinks its easy changing from a child into a teen is easy it is really not. cause from those stages if you do not know the difference of the world, a persons life will never change.

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Am I so blind, of the world around me?
I lived in denial, sheltered from the world
I was young, hidden from life, now I see.
From child to teen, I’ve glimpsed life to be hurled
From life to death, I will gain great insight
But just if I know the dark from the light
 

© 2009 new worlds last thought


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Good concept and well written. It'd be interesting if you write a new entry for each "passage" of life, since our perceptions seem to change just about every decade. Interesting stuff - add some more!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The meaning was beautiful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very profound. A beautifully written sentiment for ones realization of the journey thru life.

I look forward to reading more. ,,,,,Mhk melvin

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

love the style and the meaning

Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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i am just trying to find my way in this world. I feel like i'm just living life in fear. i have been able to over come small mounds of fear. even though this sounds like the basic teen story. i .. more..

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