Broken barstools, double faces

"I've always wanted to be an asstronaut, you know?"
...
"I've always dreamed about exploring uranus."
...


The lady finally turned to him,
looked at the man next to her,
harbouring himself on the high barstool,
hiding his worried face behind his drink,
bent over the counter.

She emptied her drink in his face.


"Oh, don't be so analitycal."
...

She got up,
left a ten dollar bill,
walked out the door.

"Women, they're always so cuntroversial."
...

Reviews

[Inda]

Awesome piece, simple and vividly painted, especially love the last line.

[plainme]

Thanks, just to be clear on this 'poem', I've got nothing against women!

[abraxus89]

lmfao. Ive some guy did this in the same bar as me, id honestly be pissing myself laughing!

hahahaa

[plainme]

Just like throwing an ice cube on the floor and saying, ''now that the ice has been broken,...'' ;-)

[abraxus89]

lmao exactly!

[NebraskaHope]

Nice poem

[plainme]

Thanks!