Intro

Siena

           

Sometimes I just feel like I could

            die.

I could just fall into the ocean

            and drown.

Not even try, just let it all go,

            go to hell.

No one would care, they would forget

            that I ever lived.

I could jump out into the sky

            and fly, fly away.

 

 

Martha

 

She

            Thinks

                        She

                                    Wants

                        To

            Die

But

            She

                        Doesn’t

                                    Understand

           Anything

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Mr Alednac]

oooooooooo very interesting here! Both with form and content, this intro does a good job of hooking someone in because you're intermediately presented with the conflict already. And with the form its cool because with Martha's dialogue is all chopped up and fragmented which reflects on her personality. Good job!!

[Jessica]

Thank you!