Keeper

we all need friends like this..

You washed me down

With a sentiment of noun

Spoke gently in intimate

With weight without hate

Brushed through my hair

Untangling the despair

So rare to care

You oiled me like a violin

Smoothed my skin of chagrin

With the strings of your bow

You played to the flow

A tune, a symphony of silence

A dance without pretence

Took me into the safety of you

Spoke of beginnings anew

Never stepping over the line

In truth divine you made me mine

Again I thank you deeper

More than you could comprehend

You’re a keeper

The definition of a real friend

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sethnicity]

Wow thats a wonderful poem! Could Make a brown Man like me blush! A great message to send to a very dear friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Yes we all need someone like this... a very smooth and charming ode to your friend.