The Book of Thaumaturgus (The seduction of Connath)

working on some fantasy..

He found her straddling the day

Her blackened hair dancing in the wind

As Samhain dawned drawing tight the earth

Beneath his hoofed foot

He parted the moon light which the Goddess bathed him in

And pulled Sun beams amidst the breaking light

She coiled her tongue around his horn

And bade him lie amongst the soil and grass

His will weakened in the shadows of his lust

He took his instruction with excited apprehension

The veil between the worlds was taught

Stretched to a breath as it passed through the dimensions

She pulled his carnality from beneath him

And rubbed it into her opaque skin

While the scent of his intentions overpowered his mind

She rode him with the pulse of animus palpitating his ego

He held her waist, his fingers burning through the layers

Of her tenebrous form

Her hips rose to met the sun and turned it black as her heart

While the sirens watched with breath baited

He pulled himself away from her sorcery

Her smile waxen like the moon

The earth’s belly rumbled as her sacrifice deliquesce

Opening its orifice which lay dormant for a millennia

It swallowed her whole

Her screams peppered the silence of his heart

And he knew the memories of her would outlive his reign

Reviews

[The Random Writings Of ..]

WOW! yes, I read a lot of your work when I was on here 3 years ago and this is very different. But it is stunning! Working on some fantasy indeed!!!
The vivid descriptions you use are incredible and your word choice overpowers the imagination. This is one hell of a piece (excuse the language). Breathtaking, Exciting, Lust, Sexual, Sexy, Imitative, Wicked. And the setting, yes taking you back to a time not necessarily in reality (if this makes sense). I absolutely love it! I hope you do some more of this! You have a amazing way of making this piece come alive!

[Poetic Justice]

thank you..I am hoping that this delevops into a fantasy book/story..

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

Yes! I would love to see more!!!

[Poetic Justice]

putting a synopsis together I will email to you if you like..your opinion would be greatly appreciated

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

Absolutely!! Let me know!

[Sethnicity]

I think the other comments sum it up but I'd like to join in approval...
There were some really tasty licks in this poem... especially:
"She rode him with the pulse of animus palpitating his ego"
and
"Her screams peppered the silence of his heart"
such dynamics in emotion if feels like tectonic plates riding on the molten crest of world waves...

[Devons]

Rich with mythological symbolism and fantastical imagery, this bubbles like some threatening volcano, culminating with a finale in which only nature wins. Having no previous knowledge of the meaning of "Samhain", I would have been drawn to a similar conclusion but, having understood its literal meaning, all the vagaries of the poem become clearer still. The quasi-biblical sense of revelations beats a fierce drum-beat, ominously threatening and muderously sombre, creating a world of dark, pressing clouds like harbingers of doom....and perhaps that is indeed (at least to me) the beginning of winter. Very interesting.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Skin on skin, sin on sin... wickedly sensual... LOVED IT!

[Poetic Justice]

:)

[Sahm King (Ark)]

Now, this is a very nice piece of art, PJ (if you don't mind me calling you PJ). I haven't set eyes on your work in a while. Would you mind if I shared this on my page (I started a new one: We Drink Because We're Poets)?

[Poetic Justice]

LOL no dont mind PJ :) and would be honoured if you shared it on your page. Hoping to develop into a story..and can I have the link to your page x

[Sahm King (Ark)]

Here you go PJ! https://www.facebook.com/permalink.php?story_fbid=177917002344519&id=283519385085639

[Poetic Justice]

cheers hun xx