Sorrow Seekers

Got bored/Facebook keeps freezing/spent too much time on deviantArt and Trade Me so I wrote a poem

Forgiven a roses thorn but never a jealous friend,

Forgotten the words but never shall the heart mend,

Fovever hearing whispers, softly left unspoken,

 

Picking up the shards but the mirror is still broken,

Pieces of a puzzle but one could never fit,

Pacing in the candlelight yet no candles are lit,

 

Heal will the wounds but the reflection is left scarred,

Halation on a photograph and the memory is marred,

Hither you come to hide from all of the pain,

 

Fathomless hatred knows no gain,
I can see the choir but they shall never sing,

Live to eliminate the sorrows that others seek to bring.

 

By A.Miles (me)
Age:15

Author's Note

Sorry if it's dumb

Reviews

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

I think this poem is amazing. The expressions, imagery, and metaphors you used are outstanding. And quite thought-provoking...

Thank you for sharing this thoughtful poem.

[pixieheart97]

Thankyou Aianarie :)
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[Kes]

It's not dumb. :)
I love this idea of all these things that are there, but not really there. It makes me think of suffocating sorrow. Hiding it, but not destroying it.
I really love this.
Keep writing.
K

[pixieheart97]

Thankyou Kes
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