kiss

Song hook inspired by my ex, Jay.

Wrap your fingers round my neck as I take a drag of your kiss. Tap the ashes off our burning love, cause we are fine and we are whole. 

Author's Note

*Photo used does not belong to me.

Reviews

[Chaos_Collector]

I feel like this song would be awesome. This hook rings through my head and over again. Eloquently put together. I love it

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Is there a whole song of this...or is this just as you say the hook...of an impending write for a song in mind...

[Kelly]

This particular hook is part of a song that is whole, but I feel like a couple things need to still be tweaked.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Indeed...have at it...let me know if you finish...

[Kelly]

I certainly will!