Love is War

this is a song that i like to listen. sing by miku from vocaloid

"There's nowhere for it to go anymore, the heat of this love"

 

I don't know where I want to go again (my heart is so lonely)

 

"The grey clouds, the monochrome clamor 
The sunlight casts a shadow, the twilight changes color"

 

They just represent my feelings

 

"The world blurs; even so, will I still love you? 
I know this -- but what should I do? 
How can I, what should I... 
What an idiot... I am"

 

I don't know what I should do

What an idiot I am!!

 

"Let's go, this is war 
Just seeing you so happy...! 
Ardent love is a sin 
I'll show you my feelings"

 

Let’s go this is war

I’ll show you my feelings

 

"The megaphone I shouted into has broken 
However much I stretch, I'm not in your field of vision"

 

Can you realize that I am here?!

 

"Ah, the sky cleared before I knew it and it doesn't suit me 
I can't hold my feelings back 
How can I, what should I..."

 

I cant hold my feelings back

 

"Because I'm not going to cry"

 

Because I’m not going to cry!

 

"I love you"

 

I love you!!

 

"I'm fighting, shooting for the heart 
I didn't choose this way 
I'll show you how my skirt flutters 
And steal your gaze away"

 

I didn't choose this way

You make me have no choice

 

"Prepare for a counterattack 
I'm fighting a losing battle 
Love is blindness 
Your kiss opens my eyes"

 

Yea... love is blindness

And your kiss opens my eyes

Author's Note

this song just represent my feelings
hope you like this~

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

I like this great write

[Fang]

I really like this, you will become a great writer. ^^

[Weeping Willow]

I love it, your great with writting keep it up.

[Irvette Dauphine]

well, this is a song that represent my feeling. hear that song, u'll like that... ^_^

[Tazz S.H.]

I'm amazed o_o Bravo. Keep writing, this is truly utterly beautiful!!!

[Irvette Dauphine]

thank you~

[The dark story]

""The grey clouds, the monochrome clamor
The sunlight casts a shadow, the twilight changes color"
.this line really blew me awway.what a great poem it is!'i loved it ahell lot....the last stanza was really awesome and touching.i even like the diction...my bows of thanks to you for sharing this sweet opem.HATS OFF TO YOU!!!1

[Irvette Dauphine]

this is a song, just find it ;)
anyway, very much thank you :DD

[The dark story]

i had that feeling(that it is a song).ooooooppps!!!!!!!!.i forgot to read that Author's note...sorry about that!!!!!!
and anyway.it's my pleasure to read your enthralling writings..you've become one of those writers from whom i have learnt something good about life!!!!!.

[Irvette Dauphine]

i glad to hear that ^.^

[Castonovia]

Song is lyrical indeed, think I sung almost all of it and it has a good beat, very powerful with such deep set emotions and love the alliteration like it's meant to be remembered, well penned ;)

[Irvette Dauphine]

anyway thanks~ ^^

[Castonovia]

No problem :p

[deepblue04]

nicely done :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[RachelReaper]

The title drew me in like a moth to a flame and kept me transfixed the whole time, very nice job with this!

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[Hester Vane]

Great write! The language is beautiful!

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~ :)

[Rika]

love that song!

[Irvette Dauphine]

yeah.. me too!!