our memories

just thinking about today, the future, and the past.. and then i get this idea..

today is a challenge

and the future is a mystery 

what somethings beautiful and wonderful that we have?

the answer is our past 

our memories

although that the terrible memories

although that a memories that you want to forget

there must be something beautiful hidden

never think to walk back pass through the time

because we cant made it

just learn to don't make the same mistake twice

and of course we have a memories 

that we want to be there forever

that why i told to you

our memories are our treasures 

when you cant handle the challenge 

or you cant solve the mystery

just relax and think about your past

Author's Note

sorry if i use wrong word or my grammar is terrible..
what do you think about this, friends?

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

E.E Cummings is also a poet who don't care about his grammar... Besides the message is what's important I like it... very good

[Irvette Dauphine]

glad to hear you like it.. :)
thanks~

[GhostlyAuthor]

I love it great use of word placement it's very though provoking please excuse the lack of puncuation the period button is broken

[Irvette Dauphine]

glad to hear that you like it.. :)
thanks~

[imatotalboss]

I really like this,fantastic job. :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

glad to hear that you like it..
thanks~

[That_Girl]

I really like this! :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

glad to know that you like it :)
thanks~

[Tattered Teddy]

Good job, luv!

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[Weeping Willow]

I loved this, I'm showing my famliy this

[Irvette Dauphine]

thank you very much :D

[RachelReaper]

This reminds me of something that could come out of kingdom hearts :) when Roxas (in 365/2 days) catches glimpses of Sora that flit through his mind, kind of like memories he can't quite place. Excellent job!

[Irvette Dauphine]

haha.. thanks~

[Dominique]

I love this poem it is truely wonderful. Memories are our treasures.

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This is such a beautiful poem about memories. I loved it! I liked the picture too.
Thanks a lot for sharing!
100/100

[Irvette Dauphine]

the pic is roxas and with text "memories"
but, the pic is too small to read that..
btw thanks~

[Crimson Bayonet]

pretty good. Keep on writing! :-)

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~