training and training

training and training

A Chapter by Irvette Dauphine

hanii is waiting for reza at the field. reza is walking to hanii lazily still yawn. hanii just waiting until reza is speaking because she know that reza will blame her.
"okay, first, you're wake up too early, do you want to see the sunrise?" ask reza, angrily 
"yea, i always to see the sunrise while thinking about this world" said hanii with cold voice while see the sun
"what do you mean?"
"nothing, what is the second?"
"second i'll explain to you about our history first before we get start to training"
"your clan and your history.. okay then" said hanii while sit on a log
"i just want to tell my history. i am from the ordinary human, my parents didn't accept the mark that like painted to my body. i am a dragon, i have rune, and i must receive the accepted from a dragon" reza take his shirt off and there a red fiery mark that drawn on his chest and a thing that planted on his heart "this amulet is a sign from dragon that he accept me. if i dont get it before my age is 15, i can die. and i must be like the dragon, peaceful and justice. if i dont do that, this amulet will kill me"
"hmmmm..." hanii just listening up
"and grandine have the mark and the amulet too, but for girl it different" 
"grandine is on the way to here, can you ask to show it to me?" said hanii, cut what reza said
"hmmm.. she is behind you, how you know that?"
"hy all" said grandine "why you two doesnt start to training? i want to see you two training"
"he want to told me about his history first" said hanii
"oh yea, grandine, can you show your amulet to hanii?" ask reza
"of course i can" said grandine, smiling
grandine show her right hand and then slowly there a white mark that growing from back of her hand to all part of her right hand. and there an amulet at the back of her hand.
"see, it different than me.." said reza
"yea.. your amulet is planted on your chest and grandine's amulet is planted inside her right hand" said hanii
"yes, that true.." said grandine while remove the mark
"okay, i understand now. when we can get training?" ask hanii
"okay, use this" reza take 4 dagger and throw 2 dagger to hanii
"simple dagger" catch the dagger and then stand up
"i wacth you two here" said grandine while sit on the log
"but, before you use that, i want you to follow me" said reza start to run
reza run around the field, the field is really large and reza is running really fast. hanii just smiled and run to follow reza, hanii's speed is same with reza's speed. reza stop suddenly and attack hanii with his dagger, hanii already realize that and with very fast movement dodge reza's attack and hold reza's movement by put her dagger to reza's neck and make a rune by her left hand.
"whoa.. you're really fast, hanii!" said grandine, amazed
"thanks.." said hanii while remove her dagger from reza.
"i dont expect this one" said reza "you're really ready to use dagger"
"lets we try it again" said hanii
hanii training with reza until lunch, they break for awhile and then training again again until tea time. after tea time hanii relaxing her body and her mind in the waterfall. she usually do sit up, push up, and pull up several time before reza wake up and go to field and then run around the field. and that what they do in 1 week.
"you have very sharp eye and instinc, and your speed is suitable with dagger. now, i dont have anythings to teach you" said reza one day after they are training.
"thanks.." said hanii while go back to home and reza is following her "i need to go to another clan to improve my skill"
"i think you can ask mrs.camellia, she is here from this morning" said reza while open up the door
"i knew that" said hanii "hy mrs.camellia" 
"oh, hy sweetheart" said camellia, smiling "you want to ask something, right? so, sit there and lets i hear what is your question"
"how you know that?" ask hanii
"we have same power to feel aura and read mind, but your power is more better than me. you can know many people mind in just one sec, but you still dont believe your power"  said camellia
hanii just thinking in silent
"i go outside with reza, mrs. camellia" said grandine while walk to the door and then go out with reza
"okay, you need to learn about rune basic. i'll send you to my friend, he is know all about rune"
"where i can meet him?" ask hanii
"he always inside a cave on a mountain. you can go by walks, it not too far"
"okay, i'll pack up my stuff"
"i'll help you" said camellia while satnd up and go to hanii's room with hanii
hanii pack her bag up and camellia preparing some medicine and food for hanii. after that hanii take a bath and wear new clothes that camellia give to her. she wear short training clothes, gloves, long socks, and training shoes. she also wear black robe with hood. she meet reza, grandine, and camellia for the last time and then she go toward to the mountain.


© 2012 Irvette Dauphine


Author's Note

Irvette Dauphine
still have grammar problem
help me to find the name of next trainer and the mountain name
i am stuck to choose a name..

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You did pretty good, but some words don't make any sense, like " reza is walking to hanii lazily still yawn" and some need to change words " reza take his shirt off " you had to put "took" instead of "take". You forgot to add words to some sentences " hanii training with reza until lunch" you forgot to put "was"
But overall this is still great!
100/100
I'll try to think for the trainer and the mountain name.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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12 Years Ago

Zeke... Zack... Danny... Dell... Kile... Rudes...olices... Alexis...
Irvette Dauphine

12 Years Ago

hmmm... the teacher is old and already be master..
i think those name is suit to young trainer.. read more
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12 Years Ago

Okay..



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Nice chapter. Waiting for next one. And by the way I've got some names for tainers. How about: Leroy, Willfred, Odette. Hope you like them. And for mountaisn I would agree with Roxast and hpw about Mountaun Kunren (popped up in my mind). Hope you are satisfied with them. Nice chapter by the way. Keep writing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Irvette Dauphine

12 Years Ago

thanks~
i'll thinking about your suggestion :)
Anonymous Girl

12 Years Ago

My pleasure and okay :)
You did pretty good, but some words don't make any sense, like " reza is walking to hanii lazily still yawn" and some need to change words " reza take his shirt off " you had to put "took" instead of "take". You forgot to add words to some sentences " hanii training with reza until lunch" you forgot to put "was"
But overall this is still great!
100/100
I'll try to think for the trainer and the mountain name.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

∠( ᐛ 」∠)_

12 Years Ago

Zeke... Zack... Danny... Dell... Kile... Rudes...olices... Alexis...
Irvette Dauphine

12 Years Ago

hmmm... the teacher is old and already be master..
i think those name is suit to young trainer.. read more
∠( ᐛ 」∠)_

12 Years Ago

Okay..

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Irvette Dauphine
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i really like to read books!! and it would be awesome if i can write some story and be a great book writer.. in holiday and my free time i like to imagine stories and in my mood i like to write poems.. more..

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