my little cute sister

my little cute sister

always happy and smiling

if i were sad

she always make me happy again with her smile

but now..

she laying on bed

she cant playing or make me happy again

even she cant smile brightly again

leukemia take away her life

she cant do anythings again

i cant sleep

i cant eat

i cant think

what in my mind is just her

"why her?

  why my little cute sister?

  why must?"

i said with tears and pain

i always pray for her 

to stay strong against leukemia

she get weaker and weaker

until one day she is cannot move

she is even cant talk easily

she want me to be strong

and let she go

"big bro

  i cant always be by your side

  but remember

  i am always inside your heart 

  if you fell sad or lonely

  just call memories about me

  and i will cheer you up

  like what i always do"

after she said that

her condition turn to crisis

she is comma

day by day

she dont wake up

her condition is still comma

i always beside her bed 

grab her hand and praying

talking with her

although she never answer me

my family just let her go

but not me

i cant let my little cute sister go

she is everything in my life

one day

i dream what her do before she is comma

i completely remember what she said

and then i thinking

it's okay to let her go

so, i praying to her

not to staying life

but just go pass trough the life

the tomorrow day

she is awake

and she is completely fine

me with my family enjoy her last life

until we see the sunset in hospital

the sun is go and she is follow

the sun will come back next morning

but she doesnt come back

i know now

'when your heart is hurting

its kinda like being blind

you don't see the people that are there for you'

my family and my friends

and of course my little cute sister is always beside me

every day and every time

Author's Note

this idea is came up when i read forensakura journal 'staying strong'
i am crying.. what a pitiful life.. stay strong frozensakura~
btw, i still have problem with grammar :P

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

Letting go of the person you love is really painful after all... plus we never know how long anyone can stay with us

[Irvette Dauphine]

agree with you.. :)

[Hatchling]

Good poem but it so sad

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[Brianna Van Zandt]

This is a good write, but so sad!

[Irvette Dauphine]

yea.. that what i purpose to..
this poem is to write the sad feeling..

[Tattered Teddy]

WOW very very sad and I did not really expect what it turned into when I first started reading.

[Irvette Dauphine]

haha.. :D
thanks~

[icerhex]

This is awesome, also sad and well written. Well done :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[F.P. Chat]

I do think that this poem has potential but the grammar and the missing words throw me off. If you improve this I think you will be able to express your feelings easier.

[Irvette Dauphine]

ooh.. where i missing?
please help me to fix it then..
because, yea know, i have trouble with grammar

[zainul]

Thank you, Irvette.
You have written this lovely and passionate poem on behalf of too many people around the world who are suffering from leukemia and other life threatening diseases.
You stayed with your sister ,always supported her and lastly when she left the world you kept her in your heart.
It is the humanity that everyone of us should follow.
You have given us a lesson on humanity.
Wonderful write.
Very sincerely yours,
Zainul

[Irvette Dauphine]

this is not my experience, my friend experience it actually..
i write it seems like i am is him, i imagine what i fell if i be him..

thank you very much..

[zainul]

I understood your point when I read the poem and your note.
But,I preferred to consider that it really happened with you as your poem was so realistic.
You have a great power to narrate events.
Your future appears pretty bright.
Please smile and be happy,Irvette.

[Irvette Dauphine]

okay, what i said above is not about frozensakura, i talk about my friend that lost his little sister because leukemia

of course i smile and happy :D
i just tough this is a good poem, not a great or amazing poem..

[Irvette Dauphine]

but a lot of people like it and said this is great poem ^_^

[zainul]

I certify that it is a good as well as an amazing one.

[zainul]

They say the right thing.
Keep trust on the people.
Please remember:Vox populi,Vox Dei.
Voice of the people is the voice of God.

[Irvette Dauphine]

i'll always remember that

[zainul]

Thank you,sweet heart.

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

I loved this amazing poem, it reminds me of my little sister.
Excellent job!
Thanks for sharing this outstanding poem.
100/100

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[Owlgirl]

Wow. This is power. Intense emotion and love, great job, the pain is like you're living it and the reader feels it deep. Awesome writing.

[Irvette Dauphine]

i cant say anythings..
what i can say is thanks~

[RachelReaper]

screw the grammar problems, this emotion is real and actual made my eyes water as I read this. Not many things can do that, so great job.

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~