my little cute sister

my little cute sister

always happy and smiling

if i were sad

she always make me happy again with her smile

but now..

she laying on bed

she cant playing or make me happy again

even she cant smile brightly again

leukemia take away her life

she cant do anythings again

i cant sleep

i cant eat

i cant think

what in my mind is just her

"why her?

  why my little cute sister?

  why must?"

i said with tears and pain

i always pray for her 

to stay strong against leukemia

she get weaker and weaker

until one day she is cannot move

she is even cant talk easily

she want me to be strong

and let she go

"big bro

  i cant always be by your side

  but remember

  i am always inside your heart 

  if you fell sad or lonely

  just call memories about me

  and i will cheer you up

  like what i always do"

after she said that

her condition turn to crisis

she is comma

day by day

she dont wake up

her condition is still comma

i always beside her bed 

grab her hand and praying

talking with her

although she never answer me

my family just let her go

but not me

i cant let my little cute sister go

she is everything in my life

one day

i dream what her do before she is comma

i completely remember what she said

and then i thinking

it's okay to let her go

so, i praying to her

not to staying life

but just go pass trough the life

the tomorrow day

she is awake

and she is completely fine

me with my family enjoy her last life

until we see the sunset in hospital

the sun is go and she is follow

the sun will come back next morning

but she doesnt come back

i know now

'when your heart is hurting

its kinda like being blind

you don't see the people that are there for you'

my family and my friends

and of course my little cute sister is always beside me

every day and every time

Author's Note

this idea is came up when i read forensakura journal 'staying strong'
i am crying.. what a pitiful life.. stay strong frozensakura~
btw, i still have problem with grammar :P

Reviews

[Spookers]

This is heart touching and so sad.

[Colleen a Bean]

I love it and your grammar is not that bad :) It is so sad yet happy all at the same time nice job.

[Andile]

your gramma has improved,you poem is very touching and it really brings tears to my eyes. This poem is really great.

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[Andile]

you are welcome

[Denis K.]

This is really sad, it really reminds me of my grandmother's death, but this is still a great poem.

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[The dark story]

aww.it's so sweet and an emotional poem.....i sorely liked the stanza in which she was saying ,.......
"big bro
i cant always be by your side
but remember
i am always inside your heart
if you fell sad or lonely
just call memories me
and i will cheer you up
like what i always do""..and the second last stanza.comparing her departure with the setting sun.seriously a very great poem touched my heart.and sorry.but if you'll work at the grammar.i think the emotions will blossom with their full strength....

[Irvette Dauphine]

i still learn english and i'll do my best to improve my grammar :)
btw thanks~

[The dark story]

ofcourse you will...if you can write so magnificently at this rate.than it goes without saying that you would do wondrous when you'll "learn" it.

[Irvette Dauphine]

yea.. i always learn and do my best :)

[The dark story]

so keep it up:D

[Irvette Dauphine]

of course :D

[TrinityHawk]

young man you brought me to tears at 45. That is a good poem. It brought me back to my mother's death of cancer and my sitting by her side. I also lost a sister but for different reasons. Yes spelling and grammar mistakes, (but I have those as well) and that is something you can work on if you truly have the desire to do so. The meaning behind the poem is very profound. Nice work.

[Irvette Dauphine]

haha.. thanks :)

[Gothic Girl]

other than the spelling and grammar mistakes, this poem is good. very sad. so sad to lose a loved one.

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[Junert]

Nice poem, it hurts to lose a loved one.

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks.. yea, thats true..

[Rhianne Ney]

please read BL White's I am more than anything... her poem can also relate to this... leukemia and other diseases are great killers... losing people because of that is saddening... but people who's striving is also inspiring

[Irvette Dauphine]

i'll do it..

[Mazie Tackett]

awh soo sad

[Irvette Dauphine]

yea..

[Mazie Tackett]

your real good

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~

[Mazie Tackett]

your welcome