found by the good clan

hanii running pass trough the grassland chasing by dragon. 'i must run into forest immediately or the dragon caught me' hanii said while running. hanii found a forest, but it still far and the dragon is just too close. 'oh no' hanii start to worried because dragon that chase her is fire dragon.

suddenly there a man that run to the dragon and jump over to the dragon's head, he can reach the dragon's head because he jump with pushes by his fire burst on his arm. he can easily make the dragon down and hold the dragon's fire breath and make the dragon fear. 

"now listen to me dragon!" he said while hold the dragon movement "i can easily kill you, but you are a special creature and you're very amazing. so," release the dragon "just go from here dragon.." he smile while see the dragon fly away.

"hy, thanks to help me" said hanii

"no problem" he walks to hanii and give hand "my name reza"

hanii shake reza's hand "mine hanii"

reza is handsome, with fiery red hair and blue deep ocean eyes. he has athletic body and he well-trained with dragon (proved with some scar and that must made from a dragon).

"what are you doing that make the dragon chase you?"

"i am fugitive of dark clan, so they use dragon to find me.."

"why?"

"yea.. i have their power and their secret information"

"ooh.. like what?"

"pyromancer" hanii release black fire

"whoa.." reza is step back to avoid the fire

"necromancer" hanii release a soul and then seal it

"creepy"

"champion of the darkness" hanii make reza swallowed by darkness

"very dark, i cant see anything" reza look around

"yes of course" hanii whisper to reza's ear and then erase the darkness

"whoa.. you're dangerous" reza found hanii is at his back

"..." hanii just smiled and suddenly she is fainted because of tired. fortunately reza catch her.

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reza bring hanii to his clan to resting hanii. reza clan is placed near from dragon mount. the dragon mount is fulled by dragon (just peace dragons), but there no many dragon everywhere at this world.

at his clan hanii get a comfort room with a glass door with beautiful backyard view. reza put hanii down to bed and covered her with a thin blanket. and then, reza go to meet someone he know that will make hanii feel better, a priest, names camellia. the church is far, because of different clan, camellia is in healer clan, very useful clan and friendly clan. need riding horse to arrive for 15 minutes

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hanii feel she is on the bed and there someone beside here that use rune to her. she can fell that someone is trying to recover her. she feel that her body is recover at all and then she is sleep.

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arrived at the church, reza found aurora, camellia's daughter, is watering flowers in front of the church.

"hi aurora, where is your mom?" said reza while hop down from his horse

"hi reza, my mom is inside the church. come on, i'll take you to mom" said aurora while walk to open the gate

"okay.." reza follow aurora to go in the church

"mom.. reza here..." said aurora to her mom at the room

"ooh.. reza.." said camellia while get out from her room "how are you?"

"im always fine mrs.camellia" answer reza while smiled

"why you come here?" said camellia

"there a guest that need your help, i explain it in the way to my clan"answer reza

"okay, lets go then" said camellia

"can i go with you mom" said aurora

"it's okay, but we need horse-drawn carriage" said reza

"we have one at the back" answer camellia

"okay" said reza

reza go to outside, take his horse and go to the church back to set the horse-drawn carriage. camellia and aurora ready and waiting infront of the church. after finish, reza go to infront of the church, take up camellia and aurora and then go back to his clan. at the way back, reza explain about how he met hanii.

arrived at reza's clan, they go to where hanii is. at hanii's room there one people that take care hanii, names grandine. she is wind dragon slayer, meaning she is get trained from wind dragon. she is just can make someone condition is normal back.

"how's her now, dear?" ask reza to grandine

"her breath is normal now and i think she is sleeping now" answer her while walk to reza

"okay, thanks. you always can be relied" said reza, smile and hug gradine

"you always welcome and if you need help, just call me" said gradine and then she is leaving from the room

"okay, bye.." said reza "hey wait, please walk around with aurora. maybe she will happy with you than with us"

"okay, lets go aurora" said grandine "where we go first aurora?" said her while walks away

"her girlfriend is very nice, reza" said camellia

"oh, yes.." reza embarrased "of course. hehehe.." 

"btw, what do you want to me to do?" ask camellia

"oh yeah.." reza let camellia sit on the chair which is in that room "she is have terrible memories, i think, and she is in dark side. but, she has good heart. so, can you calm her heart to not be evil heart, because of the pressure of her power. you know that right?"

"hmmmm..." camellia is thinking about the problem 

"she is even a champion of the dark!" 

"owh.. that not good"

"yea..."

"okay, i'll prepare what i need at your clan garden and in the kitchen"

"okay, let go then.." said reza while stand up

"no" camellia stand up and stop reza "you wait here and wake up her. i'll go by my self, i know where is the garden and the kitchen, i always go here"

"okay.." said reza

camellia leaving room to go to the garden and reza sit at edge of the bed where hanii is sleeping. he is tying to wake up hanii with gently way. after a few trying, hanii open her eyes.

"..." hanii rubbing her eyes and look around "reza? where am i?"

"you're in my clan now. dont worry" answer reza

"hmmm..." sit up "thanks" smiled to reza

"dont mention it. btw, how old are you?" ask reza

"..." thinking "9 almost 10, why?" 

"wow.. at your age now, i am still training. not as strong as you're"

"hey, i am still in training too and i need more traning!"

"okay.. you want to train other power?"

"of course!"

"but first, you need weapon. because your power is limited"

"my weapon is my hand and my karate skill"

"whoa.. you cannot use your hand for the real battle, you need a weapon. maybe i can teach you use dagger"

camellia come to room and that make reza and hanii stop talking. she bring 2 cups, a glass, a pot, and a bowl full fresh berries. she put that on table and walk to hanii's bed.

"hanii, this is mrs.camellia. she is a priest in healer clan" said reza

"pleased to meet you mam" said hanii to camellia

"dont too polite to me" camellia smiled "okay, now lets check your condition hanii" said camellia while put her hand to hanii's forehead

both reza and hanii "........."

"your condition is good. you can go training with reza later. now, lets we take a drink and eat some fresh berries" said camellia while see reza and hanii face

"of course yes!" hanii and reza stand up and walks (run) to the table

"haha.. kids." said camellia while walks to the table too

camellia pour tea from the pot to the cups and then she sit infront of hanii. reza is sit beside hanii. camellia give hanii a glass of tea with a seed inside. the seed rapidly growing to a beautiful white flower.

"this is chrysanthemum" said camellia "come on, drink it hanii.."

hanii is drink it "this is sweet" she said

"you have wound in your heart" said camellia

"..." hanii's face turn to sad

"are you okay?" said reza while look at hanii's face, worried

"i know what you feel, please relax and drink off your tea" said camellia

"..." hanii drink the tea off and trying to relax

"how you feel now?" ask camellia

"better?" said hanii with cold voice

"hey hey" said reza

"it's okay. would you tell us what is your memories?" ask camellia

"i can't" hanii answering still with cold voice

"hanii, please calm down" reza is worried

"..." there rune around hanii, she is full of emotional and she cant handle that

"reza, go away" said camellia with serious voice

reza moved to the door and stand there "i scared now"

camellia release her rune to hanii and hani is like pushed by a strong wind to the wall. hanii is fainted. camellia take up hanii and bring her to the bed.

"it's okay now, reza. i dont think this will happen. i'll be here until tomorrow, please take aurora home" said camellia to reza

"okay.." said reza and then he go out

"ooh.. please tell grandine to go here too"

"okay.."

reza go to find grandine and aurora. while camellia sit at the edge of the bed and stay with hanii. camellia pet hanii's head gently. hanii wake up, she slowly open her eyes. camellia smiled and hanii sit up and hold her hand, thinking.

"..." hanii almost cry

"it's okay. i just want to release that up and built your character" said camellia while hug hanii

"..."

"come on, we eat the fresh berries. maybe that will make you better"

"okay" the voice is still cold, but a little warmer.

hanii get off from the bed and go to the table with camellia. she eat the berries in silent. the sweet flavor of the berries make hanii want it more and more, until the bowl is empty.

"how you feel now?" ask camellia softly 

"better.." said hanii with warm voice

"good" camellia smiled

grandine walk in to the room "reza said that i must go to meet mrs.camellia"

"..." hanii just look at grandine

"pleased to meet you mrs.camellia and good to see you awake, hanii" said grandine

"ooh.. grandine. i always say dont too polite to me" said camellia

"nice to meet you and thanks to turn back my condition to normal" said hanii

"how you know that?" said grandine shocked

"i know this power, i can feel it" said hanii

"okay... hanii, now you take a bath and grandine, help me to prepare dinner" said camellia

hanii stand up to go to bathroom and grandine go to kitchen

"hanii, your new clothes is on your bed!" said camellia

while hanii take a bath and grandine prepare dinner with camellia, reza come home. reza go to kitchen to check.

"hey all.. where hanii?" ask reza

"she take a bath, dear" said grandine "and you should do that too"

"i finish! reza, you can take a bath now!!" said hanii

"she can feel your aura" said camellia "come on quick, until that we eat dinner together"

"okay.." reza go to bathroom

in her room, hanii still wearing her clothes and fit it. 'yea, this clothes is fit to me' hanii see her reflection on the mirror. suddenly she fell attack aura from outside, she quickly open the door and prepare to attack. reza is behind the door use his rune.

"your instinc is really good" reza smiled "i just want to say we can eat dinner now? we still waiting for ya"

"okay.." hanii walks to dining table with reza

"hey hanii you sit here and just let grandine and reza together. haha.." said camellia

"hey hey" said reza, blushes

"okay.." hanii sit and eat dinner with quite

"tomorrow morning, we start to training" said reza

"i'll waiting for that" said hanii and then she stand up and go to her room because she is already finish

"now all, lets we sleep" said camellia go to hanii room

"okay.." said reza while go to his room with grandine

"good night" said grandine

"night" said camellia

"good night mrs.camellia" said hanii when camellia is inside her room

"night, sweetheart" said camellia and then sleep beside hanii

at the morning, hanii is the first who wake up. she run to the field and training her martial art. camellia just smile to see hanii's spirit and wake reza up. reza is little lazy to wake up in early morning, but he awake and then follow hanii to field to start the training.

Author's Note

please help me to give the name of their clan..
sorry if it too long..
still have trouble :P

Reviews

[Andile]

i think have improved don't forget to use capital letters at the start of the sentence. you are reaching higher grounds.

[ewest1220]

Some issues with word choice here but the idea seems solid.

[Irvette Dauphine]

okay.. i'll do my best to fix it..

[Knight in Armor]

This installment seems to have a few more problems than the earlier installments... One of the major problems I've noticed throughout the book is that it's been slipping from past to present tense and back. Unless it's part of the dialogue, you almost always are going to use "was" instead of "is". Similarly, you don't want to use "her" to refer to a female. You'll want to use "she". Use "her" when referring to an object that belongs to a female, like "her coat".

[Irvette Dauphine]

okay.. i'll fix it..
thanks~

[Brianna Van Zandt]

I enjoyed this. I did notice quite a few errors with word choice and grammar.

[Irvette Dauphine]

glad to hear that you enjoy this ^_^
yea.. i am still fix it i realize that i get wrong with the word choice

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Excellent chapter!
100/100

[Irvette Dauphine]

thanks~