Trying to be informational and at the same time inspiring.
Aggressively, I left the wetland Took my first gulp of errant air, Sublime...
Gazed to a light so blinding, No wonder, Just curious.
Time passes by The light dimmed Still I knew it in the sky, and now I called its name...
My cognition bequests As the vein grew wider on my brain
I classify... Simply not knowing that they are grouped, No wonder, still.
I have left the innocence, and those fading, returning lights.
The cosmos and constellations are part of my mind young.
Never believed Angels nor Demons per say. But that of Stars are real.
Now I dream as part unconscious I belittle this brain.
So beloved, I can write in-depth What I know far from before. The poem now starts...
"Juxtaposed of a light Dreamer of the night A child grew wiser In me I saw these lights..."
As despair began, I crippled to my bed, Took a sneak on windows open Trying to find another one But I can see no more For before it was blinding Now grew old, I am blind.
No pun intended, I want to learn new sounding words. So in this poem I forcefully added in my vocabulary: juxtaposition:
Juxtaposition - merely the understanding of what is seen to be what is illogically perceived (i.e., That a glass is a glass and it will break.)
The Cognitive Theory by Piaget: The development of our cognition starts from Sensorimotor, Preoperational, Concrete Operation, and matures on Formal Operation.
As the child grows, it begins to foster stimuli around his/her environment; trying to see symbols and adopt it through senses. Illogical perception as to juxtaposition begins at the Preoperational stage. Eventually as the child begins to conceptualize things, classify, elaborate, exaggerate, and even scientifically justify or explain things, he/she is beginning to reach the stage of the maturity of cognition Formal operation.
In this poem also, try to correlate the notion 'From Womb-Tomb' and you will surely enjoy this read. =)
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This poem has an almost Dadaist quality to it. I enjoy the rambling nature of it and the general sense of ominious progression that I feel. I love the bit about angels and demons and stars.
I'm curious about your definition of "juxtaposition".... is it based in psychology? It's not the layman definition which is merely the instance of two objects (or things or concepts) being placed next to each other.
Anyway, no matter. Lovely poem. Surreal. Thank you for sharing. :)
This poem has an almost Dadaist quality to it. I enjoy the rambling nature of it and the general sense of ominious progression that I feel. I love the bit about angels and demons and stars.
I'm curious about your definition of "juxtaposition".... is it based in psychology? It's not the layman definition which is merely the instance of two objects (or things or concepts) being placed next to each other.
Anyway, no matter. Lovely poem. Surreal. Thank you for sharing. :)
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