The Perfect Stalemate

Modern era of politics and religion.

in qualms, in danger
in perfection, and deterioration
destruction and inevitability
life in between
struck with its invincibility
side slash and the opposition
politics says much
but has nothing in possession
to put this mystery
into life's verge to frailty
and surgery, hanging on
sharps edge of reality
each tender motion
can commit a deadly reincarnation
of the soul's revival
to this spirit caught
jailed to a deniable injustice
and religious states sought
the pondering solstice
the mindless era,
regime of fatal aura
and the weak will slay
and the strong will be weak
climbing to this endless stairs
a social climber to seek
and the downfall of him
will destroy the wrecked realm....

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Good write

[Dante Balsote]

Stalemates are always perfect. They don't allow the other--whatever the "other" means; but most likely, it is beside itself, whatever "it" means--to move. Put three gears to "coordinate" with each other and what do you have? Stalemate!

[Rain]

Man, you loaded this with metaphors, some very brilliant, others I struggled to understand. I will read more to get used to your style. I have to give this a 100% because of it's passion and many profound lines. Rain..