Kiss Me When the Rain Falls

You were running with your night gown on
The silky smooth of it easily flown by the wind
So deep, and doesn�t clash with the blossoming breast.
Barefooted;
You smiled from a far
Making paths from the ominous ambiance
Above, the starlight illuminates your being,
As your hair glistens with satisfaction
Seeing me again touch every strands of it

You were inches from me
Suddenly,
Clasp of thunder embraces the humid air
The trees were deafening
Gushed by the cool wind
Finally the rain falls
You stopped, had gazed upon the sky;
I held you through my reach.
Still beguiled by an amazement
You keep your eyes steady,
Calm;
Unknowingly, your lips and mine�
Touched
Ambiguously

Until the rain falls
You�ll never know.
I still loved you�
Since, you have gone
Repressed me�
Flooded me
On that very night

Reviews

[Dalebear]

This poem has so much emotion and it beautiful nice poem.

Good Write

Dalebear

[Julia]

Lovely written. You can express your feelings and emotions so vividly I can picture everything. And feel it. So I give you a 5. Because many can write well, but few can touch.

[La Verne Thomas Taylor]

Nice poem. Keep writing.

[Autumn M. Miller aka Mo..]

This was a very beautiful and romantic poem. Sad and full of story and longing. I could almost see this as a movie inspiration.

[Candid Writer]

Awesome! You did an awesome job with this piece. The title stands on its own and is equally as powerful as the entire piece.

[Crystal Elisa]

Niiice

[Maxinne Marie]

WOW. Amazing.

There are some errors, though, as what Valerie Jones had pointed out.

But it's such a BEAUTIFUL piece, so I'm adding this to my favorites. =)

[Scott Eckert]

This is a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing....

[Garrett Marcus Copeland]

not bad at all, something doesn't flow quite right for me but I can't put my finger on it.

cudoes RC

[Jofer Serapio]

Goes with my whole attitude this morning. Thanks for sharing!