This October Night

"This October Night"

 

This October night

Darkness descends across the lake,

A shimmering shroud of reflected stars

Swallowed by the black water.

 

This October night

The moon is full of mischief,

Castings spells and shadows on the land

Before hiding away behind pale clouds.

 

This October night

The air is ripe with spirits,

Their haunting cries chill the wind

Sending shivers to those who listen.

 

This October night

Finds me in my reverie,

Dreaming of some mythical place where

Two strong arms would surround me.

Reviews

[Pink Poison]

This October night, you have written a great poem. I think this is one of your best and that's saying a lot! I like the repitition of the line above, tying things together like a tapestry of words. Your imagery is powerful with nothing superfluos present. I especially like the ending, because love is the greatest mystery of all, is it not? Really fine piece.

[Tenten]

what a beautiful piece, its captivating and the essence is solid, its breath. i love your descriptions, its makes the night much more visible. your pieces are always a joy to read.

[JudyC]

I like the way the moon is personified, and the mention of the need to listen. The last two lines are powerful, allowing the reader to reflect on the unseen world. Beautiful imagery.