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I will f**k you like a w***e
Because I had a bad day
And I need you to make me feel better.

I will scream
And you will let me,
Crouched as you are
in the corner.

I'm really not an a*****e
I'm just misunderstood
The sound of leather snapping
Is so refreshing, don't you think?

How I love leather.
Strained material
Stretched to its limit
Any tighter and it'll break
Just like me.
 

Reviews

[E. Maggard]

Well I do beleive I will be an avid reader of yours from now on. Each word in this poem has a vital part to play, and each word is heavy with power. It's lovely and meanacing.

[Rob Welch , Master Of P..]

Nice. I can really tell that you were feeling angry. The emotions were woven so strongly in every single word. The last stanza's my favorite. lol. Keep up the great work!

[Aaron J. Wald]

wow. You really make this scene stick out in my mind. I can imagine a dungeon with a s and m type of thing going on. Great job kristen!

[B. Lapinski]

nice write...strong