negative

maybe

slick and smooth
two bodies against gravity
defying inteligence
and relying on instinct
hard, like candy
stick it in your mouth
suck on this
hot and wet
perfectly poised
for destruction of sensibility
sensuality
kicks into gear
with all kinds of noise
white black
and inbetween
forgetting the sounds
of the silence we break
eyes tight shut
and fingers burrowed, deep
into flesh and folds
into skin and sweat
two bodies
aligned
a yin and yang
like blood cells they slide
glide, along one another
forgetting their existance
in a negative atmosphere
while a litlte bit of us dies
and goes into the other one
paying close attention
to the lack of one another
in the wholeness of ourselves
as i are you
and you are me
without a single
break in time

Author's Note

ok now, everyone kick the shit out of this poem

Reviews

[Hedra Helix]

well, I think this just shows you why you're are one of my favorites still. Even after all this time. Each line leads to the next without snag Imho, a perfect conscious subconscious slide.

I think that you're starting to feel yourself anew despite this. Despite the topic. I can read it. The passion resurfacing.

Its' a common one. This feeling you speak of. Dont get lost thats all I ask.

[kurrupted]

E, E, E, E!....Erotically awesome, this s**t is cool...well spread out, so hot it flows making mills and boon look like dysney comic. LOL....make a short story out of this, like she use to be a stern, hardheaded, dusting guys off kind of girl who per chance meets this guy....who after patiently enduring all she puts him through the "playing hard to get" trials she yielded in and he took her to a level she aint never seen or imagined befor.