prolouge pt1

Prolouge

 

Home of sally and percy Jackson

 

"Percy you have mail." Percy Jackson looked up, "Whos it from, mom." he asked his mother "Umm Olympus." I took the letter with a raised eyebrow. from her and opened it

 

           Dear Mr. Percy Jackson

It will be a honnor if you will come to the Empire State building, we will explain more when I see you

Thanks Olympus

"Mom".............................

 

 

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Home of Tristen and Piper Mclean

 

"Miss Mclean you have a letter." pipers fathers maid said, piper took it and opened it

 

               Dear Miss. Piper Mclean

It will be a honnor if you will come to the Empire State building, we will explain more when I see you.

thanks, Olympus

 

Olympus?. Piper thought

 

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Foster home of Leo Valdez

 

Leo open the letter, "Bunn bann ba ba" he hummbed

         

           Dear Mr. Leo Valdez

It will be a honnor if you will come to the Empire State building, we will explain more when I see you

Thanks Olympus

"as long as I get out of this hell whole" he said to himself

 

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Camp Jupiter

 

"Jason, Hazel and Frank. please come here for a minute." Reyna said, Jason Hazel and Frank went to her "Yes Reyna" Jason said " You guys have a letter" Hazel and Frank raised a eyebrow, Reyna rolled her eyes, "Just read it." she haded it to Jason and Jason read it outloud

             " Dear Jason, Hazle, and Frank

It will be a honnor if you will come to the Empire state building, I will explain more when we see you

Thanks Olympus"

 

They stared at eachother.

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Camp Half-Blood

 

"Annabeth, Luke, Grover, Selina, Charlie,clarisse,Katie, Stroll boys can you please come to the big hall" Chiron said, all six of them followed him to the hall, "You all got a major letter, Annabeth can you read it, thanks" she took the letter and begain

             "Dear Half-bloods

It will be a honnor if you will come to the Empire State building, I will explain more when we see you

Thanks Olympus"

"Olympus" The Strolls yelled, shocked, they others just stared. amazed

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School of Nico and Binca Di Angela

 

"Nico and Binca, can I talk to you, you have a letter." the teacher said to them, Binca took the letter

                 Dear Binca anc Nico Di Angela

It will be a honnor if you will come to the Empire State building we will explain more when we see you

Thanks Olympus.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Rogue]

This is a very interesting start. :)

I did notice there is a rather large amount of typos in this: from who, who's and whose to wholes and holes, along with punctuation, etc..
I understand why this is. I would only suggest you run it by a fellow writer and let them do a quick overall edit.

Trust me, I make many errors of my own. If you let them go to long on a large piece, they can be a real beast to eventually tame.

[Piper Mclean]

thanks

[fairies Midnight]

brillienta

[Piper Mclean]

thanksa

[fairies Midnight]

welcomesa :) lol

[Piper Mclean]

lol :)

[KurKota]

Likeing it ! Good job so far.....

[Piper Mclean]

thanks Kurkota

[KurKota]

you are welcome

[Piper Mclean]

:)

[Alina-Sofia]

I liked it piper ;)

[Piper Mclean]

thank you ever so much

[Alina-Sofia]

your ever so welcome

[Piper Mclean]

:)

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:)

[Piper Mclean]

:)