Him...

About this guy I like that probably doesn't even know I exist !

He's taken my heart,

But will never know it,

He so amazing,

So mysterious,

Oh how I love him so,

But he will never know,

Why can't he see,

He's the only one for me !

Author's Note

I hope you like it ! It came straight from the heart ! It is about this kid on my bus !

Reviews

[lawrence bear]

I am taken that you are 12, and this write has so much muturity. great job, write what you will and write with your heart.

lawrence

[Voice11]

Good. Simple. Unique. I like it, keep writing!

[Beregond]

Very good! You are turning into a great writer jessi. My advice is, tell the guy how you feel. What do you have to lose? Nothing, and you have a lot to gain :-)

[The Silk Poetess]

well, tel him you are out there!

[~LeeAnn~]

one word AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[...MysteryGirl...]

I like it!
I really truely do!
I love that it came from your heart.
Its short and simple... just how i like poems..
Great Write!