plateau paradox

 

Here I stand filled with wonder

Releasing diseased thoughts I know

I am in aw as I ponder

The doorstep of a new plateau

 

On my own opaque mission

Escalating and taking form

A universal passion

Instincts start to change and transform

 

Inner self awakening

A problematic lucid cure

A cosmic undertaking

Accepting the veiled vast obscure

 

My sacred development

Dignified and unorthodox

Life’s trivial sacrament

Existence is a paradox

 

Leaving behind the foul wrecked

Attention on the free and clear

My time has come to self reflect

To figure out my purpose here

 

As I open my souls door

There’s a universe to embrace

Thoughts and concepts to explore

To find love in the human race

Author's Note

This is about my mission. Those of u close to me know what I am talking about� Those of u that don�t�. its about my chakra cleansing diet and the research involved in making it work� Yes a diet along with meditation and scents and crystals and yoga�. Its pretty much a multi metaphysical chakra balancing and cleansing diet� focusing on one of chakra point for a week until the 7th the crown which will be 2 days. How I came to this idea I am not sure on starting on my journey to find oneness I came to the gears of energy(chakra) I decided I was out of balance and in the quest to find balance is how is whole thing came about� I might be a bit over zealous with my deadline� winter solstice� I must admit I enoyed writing about sumthing positive�

Reviews

[Christopher Michael Smi..]

THANK YOU! for sharing this piece. I needed that. Truly.

"Inner self awakening
A problematic lucid cure
A cosmic undertaking
Accepting the veiled vast obscure"

That stanza is beautifully put together and flows like a spring breeze. It made me smile. I, too, am on that mission. Spiritually digging for any truths in archeology, occult knowledge, my own psyche, meditation, etc. Well, I've ranted long enough.

'eye am another you'

;)

[Sami Khalil]

As I open my souls door
There's a universe to embrace.
A nice write.

[Summers Under The Old O..]

I absolutely love this. It really speaks out to me, I love every single line. It flows quite well, and the rhyming was an nice, unexpected touch. This is going into my favorites.

-Summer

[Adela Muresan]

interesting.
let me start by saying that i really liked the way you wrote it, your speech is very elevated.
it is cool that you express yourself in a very cold a clear way about how you find a certain sense to life.

[Emily]

Wow! I can really relate to this! Awesome work here :)

[Emily]

Wow! I can really relate to this! Awesome work here :)

"Leaving behind the foul wrecked
Attention on the free and clear
My time has come to self reflect
To figure out my purpose here

As I open my souls door
There’s a universe to embrace
Thoughts and concepts to explore
To find love in the human race"

[Jack Diamond]

This is interesting. It's not something I've been exposed to before.
It's funny all the diferent topics that inspire different people. We can all be exposed to so much by simply paying attention to other human beings.
It's a very talended and very cultured poem. Nice work : )

[Aries]

Great writing..Very interesting subject. I enjoyed it very much!

[Sarah]

I really enjoyed reading this poem - I loved your use of rhyme, which never sounded forced. In fact, I didn't even realize you were rhyming til near the end of the poem. Always good. :D I've never heard of a chakra cleansing diet, but it sounds really interesting, I shall have to do some research. XD Oh, and I applaud you for writing something positive - you really don't find too many happy poems nowadays, and it's always refreshing to read one. :D

[D. Nelson]

I havn't been on here in a while and just started writing again, this is the first piece i've read since I came back, and I'm glad. I really enjoyed the flow of this piece, most all of it seemed to fit just right. There's a certain way with words that we all strive for but can't always hit, but that was a center-mass shot.