Caress my ego

 

 

 

Complete me with a touch

My persona, caressed

Insignificant lust

Sexually expressed

 

A yearning desire

Awaiting an embrace

Need to be admired

Deficiency replaced

 

Just animalism

A need to be fulfilled

Feeding narcissism

A tantalizing thrill

 

A hallow connection

To remedy this hole

Shallow stimulation

Bring life to a dead soul

 

For passions just a fuel

Nourishing vanity

Egotistical tool

Eases insecurity

 

Energy intertwined

A physical pleasure

Satisfies mortal minds

Just an empty gesture

 

Consumption and deceit

In the end the self’s bruised

In the end incomplete

The ego drained and used

Author's Note

ok... here we go... life in a nut shell from pink.... Its about shallow stimulation... dead meaningless conversation...seeing through the worlds bullshit lead me to write this... I am being vague.... i want u to read and learn.... maybe time alone reading a book or writing or bettering urself is better thn trivial comunication.

Reviews

[MrsBrown]

wow this is deep. I reread the poem after i read your authors note. I love the imagery conveyed and all it all really stands for. Im sure ur sister wants to "LORENA BOBBITT" her hubby! I like it.

[deadlife]

Nice one here. Though i want to say a lot but things like this should be dealt with feelings and words (sometimes) lack such expressions; they are vague and blunt, sometimes. So all i can 'write' to you is :)
may Everything bless you.
Take care dear.

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

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[Michael X]

this was a pleasure to read, thanks for sharing