Cleanse, replenish, Confront the darkness

Cleanse, replenish, Confront the darkness

A Poem by Pinky

Refuse to dwindle
Decline to die
Life’s just a riddle
Maybe just a lie

 
Take a second glance
Focus, clear the path
Sharpen and balance
Vanish out life’s wrath

Feeble distractions
Obscure the true goal
Free destination
Yearning to be whole

For diseased thinking
Is wasting my time
Redirect thinking
To find flow and rhyme

Cleanse, replenish me
I am bare and drained
Infernal body
My spirit is stained

 
Confront the darkness
Currents will align
Negitive caressed
Positive will shine

Arouse my sixth sense
Ideas to explore
Strengthen my essence
To search out my core

Thought analysis
Seek threw and behind
To self synthesis
Temple soul and mind

Sacred endeavor
Energy to mend
The soul is forever
Physique has an end

© 2009 Pinky


Author's Note

Pinky
the meaning is open.... i want u to find sumthing to connect with... its for u to decide wht the meaning is cuz it can vary from person to person... what it means to me may not be wht it does to you...

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This is an amazing poem. Really amazing. It had alot of power at the end. Focusing on the eternal, and banishing negative emmotions and feelings is not wrong, I feel its our very nature. Imperfection is an illusion that we only experience in this illusion called life. I want to save this poem. I will come back to it again. Love the focus, love the power of it. Nice work. : )

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Nice flow, and very good structure.


Posted 15 Years Ago


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this is the heart of a poet rendering, and the wording, flow and structure gives the feeling an
artistic sense of passion where-as the meaning itself reminds me of connecting with focus in the soul.
I loved it, a real pleasure to read.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an amazing poem. Really amazing. It had alot of power at the end. Focusing on the eternal, and banishing negative emmotions and feelings is not wrong, I feel its our very nature. Imperfection is an illusion that we only experience in this illusion called life. I want to save this poem. I will come back to it again. Love the focus, love the power of it. Nice work. : )

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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