the meaning is open.... i want u to find sumthing to connect with... its for u to decide wht the meaning is cuz it can vary from person to person... what it means to me may not be wht it does to you...
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This is an amazing poem. Really amazing. It had alot of power at the end. Focusing on the eternal, and banishing negative emmotions and feelings is not wrong, I feel its our very nature. Imperfection is an illusion that we only experience in this illusion called life. I want to save this poem. I will come back to it again. Love the focus, love the power of it. Nice work. : )
this is the heart of a poet rendering, and the wording, flow and structure gives the feeling an
artistic sense of passion where-as the meaning itself reminds me of connecting with focus in the soul.
I loved it, a real pleasure to read.
This is an amazing poem. Really amazing. It had alot of power at the end. Focusing on the eternal, and banishing negative emmotions and feelings is not wrong, I feel its our very nature. Imperfection is an illusion that we only experience in this illusion called life. I want to save this poem. I will come back to it again. Love the focus, love the power of it. Nice work. : )