Sea of Lost Souls

 

 

The cesspool

Of the lost

Confused fools

Filled with exhaust

 

Empty stares

Hypnotic eyes

Unanswered prayers

Living a lie

 

Drowning in fears

They always tread

Nothing is clear

Lost in dread

 

Muted screams

Tears washed away

To join the vile stream

Of lost hope and decay

Author's Note

Its my art and a poem to go along with it... The art isnt great its just a doodle tht grew and i scanned it and fucked with it in photoshop... the lost souls... i always draw these dudes.... in flowers in clouds ir water... idk y but its cool! Ps dont mind me i am rambling again... guess i feel better ha!!!!

Reviews

[James Takeo Panton]

this truly gives the reader a sense of loss and being overwhelmed...great write, and good artwork to compliment this writing!

[TamerQtaish]

its kinda short for my reading, but hey I am tired so I am thankful
All together the title its self drove me to the read...
Very impressive... You should be proud on a job well done

All the best,
Tamer Qtaish

[chris' girlfriend]

wow your such a good writer!!!
and this is a great poem

[Rachael]

This is absolutely beautiful!
The poem, and the images go so very perfect together.

I
Love
It.

You are very talented.

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

u r so talented and great :D

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I love the art. I think its wonderful. The poem is great too. I love the idea of lost souls and you pretty much put my thoughts in to words. I like it.

[Wolfwind Words]

I liked both the pictures and the poem that went with. The combination of the two adds a great synthesis that speaks of you, and your inner self.

I'm glad that you are feeling better. :)

I like the art/Poetry mix, keep it up!

[larryb]

I liked your poem and i LOVEDDDDDDDD your art, forget about writing poems and just work on your art.....