Harmony

just read

 

 

Its unbelievable

How hypocritical

This world can be

 

Is it questionable

It is not rhetorical

Why are we so angry

 

Its undeniable

How diabolical

Its clear to see

 

We are destructible

Always so skeptical

We are phony

 

We're dishonorable

And egotistical

We're a disease

 

Its unfavorable

We are commercial

Filled with empty

 

Its inconceivable

How f*****g cynical

We all disagree

 

We are vulnerable

Trapped in a cubical

Stuck in agony

 

We are disposable

It is historical

Insignificant fleas

 

Could be admirable

Together be musical

One harmony

Author's Note

it kinda reads like lyrics to a speed metal song... idk... just please let me know what u think!

Reviews

[Kara Emily Krantz]

i liked this - yes i can definitely hear the lyrical quality of it. the rhymes were great. i really apprecaited the unique rhymes and flow you had within the verses

"Is it questionable

It is not rhetorical

Why are we so angry"

that was my favorite verse.

these are thoughts i think a lot, but have been unable to get out into words, especially poetry. so great job with this. something different for you, and very well handled :)

hugs

[Legion]

I'd have to hear it to music. The message is interesting though.

[Lisa Hoffman]

its sad but true. Even though it was dark, I love the style.

[Shadows of Sight]

I like the theme and how in the end, it expresses hope of a better way of living this life.

I could see it as being part of a song.

Thanks for sharing! :)