Machine

 

 

 

 

I am just a casualty

I have no value

I am a just novelty

I wish I were true

 

I live in a dream

Never real

I am a machine

I don’t feel

 

Soft ware is what I am

A box is where I live

I am just a program

Meant only to give

 

An operating system

Mechanical design

deleted emotional spectrum

Biological decline

Author's Note

grammar? etc? there is more than one meaning to this...so its open to your views!

Reviews

[Jessamelia.]

Reminds me quite of what I would write.
Very well written! Gosh i love rhyming, 2nd stanza; perfect.
Simplicity is the best way to say SO much :]

[justjenn_2u]

Feeling of worthlessness living in robotic motions. A machine that has human characteristics to some degree, just not a personality to offer. You writing is very abstract in many of your poems. I enjoy your creative side!

[Wolfwind Words]

Not only did this capture the image of being a computer program really well, i could see how it could also be applied to a human and the feeling of isolation and neglect even though the computer (life) is always running.
Great Write Pink!

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

u have much to u more than many i know ur something never a nothing rather u wish to believe me or not I just wish there was some way I could show u what u mean :)

[Angel Bird]

This poem is great - I like it very much, and most of all the philosophical meaning in regard of humans is brilliant!

Great job!!!