I being revived

My only drive

Is my longing to survive

so i can finally thrive

so i will feel alive

my I being revived

Reviews

[Legion]

Wow. I thought this was craftily done especially for something so short. And the meaning of rebirth (so to speak) is a great bit to do such a thing with.

[Wolfwind Words]

This was good, i liked the simple but profound dimensions to it. The "I" being that part of us which we are deep down inside.
I liked it!
Good piece!