see

 

 

 

Close your eyes and see

What monster we can be

Not just Society,

Over all Humanity

 

Close your eyes again

And try to comprehend

We all need to amend

Humanity can transcend

 

You must be blind

To open your mind

To search deep, to find

Your purpose, your rhyme

Reviews

[~*666 Draven Von Tepes ..]

Wow nice one O check out my song eyes never cry i wrote it for u

[Kara Emily Krantz]

to find our rhyme.. i like that

the simplicity works well for this. i liked that. it's a good message, that we all need to find in our own way

[larryb]

I liked this very much, simple but to the point

[justjenn_2u]

Humanity, where has it gone? I think that once people cross over that threshold of being inhumane, it is like a high to inflict pain. We can start now with the children. I enjoyed this very much!!!! Good subject.

[Erin Phoenix]

I loved the rhyming... I'm a rhyming fan... :)

[Wolfwind Words]

Wow that was awesome! I liked the flow and the deep trancending meaning to it!
Great Write!