Life Abuse

A child whose parents are arguing.

Parents shouting,

Fear growing,

Coldness creeping.

Knife rising,

Skin slicing,

Light fading,

Death comming,

Life ending.

 

Reviews

[Warren L.G De Mills]

I was like this after reading O.o. Very good piece. Short and very effective. Good job!

[AK]

Very very well written. Your expression of emotions is perfect. Well done!

[Tegon Maus]

Yikes !! And at 13? Wow I hope your parents don't argue that much

[Me]

a well thought out write

[No name]

Nice write, it is always a sad story when things are unfolded like that best of luck.

[Pratik]

You have tried to communicate a story in few words... a story of pain which doesn't really need any more dissection.. something whose essence comes out of these few lines...it is an unique style i must say... Nicely done :)