A Mothers Lullaby

A lullaby to put children to sleep

Golden slumber kiss your eyes,
Smiles await you when you rise.
Sleep,
pretty baby,
Do not cry,
And I will sing a lullaby.

Care you know not,
Therefore sleep,
While I over watch you keep.
Sleep,
pretty darling,
Do not cry,
And I will sing a lullaby.

Reviews

[jdr / Jennifer]

elegant & beautifully written. very nice flow.

'Sleep,
pretty darling
Do not cry,
And I will sing a lullaby'

This verse reminds me of a song by the Beatles- 'Golden Slumber'

[Sarah]

Thanks. I think ,if i remember rightly, a few lines were from the song. It was for my friends birthday and they loved the beatles. Thanks for the revew.

[jdr / Jennifer]

I am a HUGE Beatles fan myself. This is a nice tribute to them & the song 'Golden Slumber' (one of my all time favorites) in the form of a lullaby. Nicely done.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww, lovely! I love this. It's so peaceful and has that calming effect. Nicely done!

[Wolfhilde]

A very sweet poem. :)

[UnderCompulsion]

This is such a nice poem.Well done!! :)

[Brianna Brie]

Very nicely done! It captures the protective stance that parents often feel.

[Sarah W. French]

That was really good. I loved the simple feel of the words and the power they showed. I could actualy see myself singing this to my own kids one day :)

[Alexis]

This was really impressive! It sounds just as professional and awesome as the other lullabies that have already been created.
The rhyming seemed effortless and each word fit into the puzzle just right to make it sound really great. It even flows nicely.
I'm seriously impressed. :) Great job!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Stunning potic piece!

[asdarkeyesclose]

this is just exquisite. all that love and tenderness.

[KAREN]

Awe! I felt like I was reading a song. Really very beautiful!!