winter leaf

winter leaf

A Poem by Sarah
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About a dear teature who died.

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The winter leaf has fallen,
Upon the grassy floor.
A dear life was stolen,
To walk through heavens doors.

I dedicate to you this rhyme,
To treasure and to love.
A soul taken before your time,
Your in the land above.

© 2014 Sarah


Author's Note

Sarah
Please tell me if I have any grammar issues or it can be improved

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A very good tribute, Sarah. One thing though, in the last line watch the difference in your and you're (you are) in this case you're is correct.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sweet leaf. But for all we know, they go somewhere. They certainly are reborn into new matter. I love leaves in fall and winter. Nice easy-to-read rhyming poem about nature.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A very nice tribute.



Enjoyed it.
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sarah

10 Years Ago

Thanks. He was an amazing person.
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott......

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Sarah
Sarah

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I am english and am 16 years old. I was born on 13th march. I live in washington in england. I write poems, short stories. books I like: Morganville vampires Fallen twilight harry potter. Fr.. more..

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