Let me out my dark damp hole

About a girl who is burried alive.

Let me out of my dark damp hole,

I'm buried deep with my cold dead soul.

Can't anyone hear me cry?

Left in my pit alone to die.

I am hungry, I can't survive,

I'm not sure how long I can stay alive.

I' buried beneath a tone of mud

I'm buried beneath the flower bud

Let me out of my dark damp hole,

I'm buried deep with my cold dead soul.

Author's Note

Sorry I was bord and depresed so i'm not sure how this is. Please Please revew. :)))

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"I'm buried beneath a tone of mud

I'm buried beneath the flower bud"

I like how you melded some exquisite imagery in such a dark poem. Nice write.

[Sarah]

Thank you. :D

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

You're welcome.