Welcome to Omo HighSchool

Akira woke up at six fifth- five to get ready for school. He did what he did ever morning by first taking a shower, bushing his teeth and then put his uniform on. He didn't even try to climb his hair because it would just stick back up. He than followed his nose to which it lead him to the kitchen filled with pancakes, eggs, and sausage with two types of juices. Akira felt like he was in heaven , Q came out the kitchen with a platter of bread," Good morning" greeted Q as he lead down the platter. "Ok dig in", said Q with that dumb smile on his face. Akira sat down and began to eat, doesn't this guy ever stop smiling thought Akira. 

After he finished his breakfasted he picked up his back pack and said good bye then he ran to catch the city bus. The bus got him right on time be fore the school gate closed. He took a deep breath as he walked into the school, the school was pretty impassive, the students were treated like royalty , now that was something he could get use to.

Akira kept walking until he ran into some girl with red hair and hazel eyes, all of her books were scattered on the floor. Akira quickly helped her gather her belongings. "Ahh i-i'm soo sorry I wasn't looking and...." Akira thought this girl really had some problems because she kept say sorry over and over again till Akira put his finger on her lips as she blushed." It's really not a big deal he", said and turned to leave  before she could say another word.

Akira classes weren't all that great all they did was take notes and he mostly fell a sleep through those.After his classes were over he deiced to  check out a certain club that catched his eye. Akira arrived at the club and smiled he could tell people like him where in this club.

Reviews

[Melody]

Super short. It felt like a chapter outline. Try detailing it more, like explaining what kinds of classes he has, what club it is, more about the girl, the features of the school...etc.

[pinky1500]

thank you

[Melody]

You're welcome.