Unaffected, Unafflicting, Jilted, F-ed Up Me

Did we ever see it coming?
Jilted and hungry-full with our pseudo politico-religious ideologies...
They never even noticed it coming in...
and when it walked in
bare hoofed, wrinkled, alone, grunting...
You and I were laying sprawled out on the floor.
Hands touching, smiling,
Soaking up the rays of forsaken hilarity.
Laughing about nothing in particular...
Because nothing was important.

Reviews

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An interesting mix of apocalyptic imagery, anomie, and indifference. A good read, methinks.

Suggestion: I believe the word you want is "lying"--reclining--as opposed to "laying"--putting.

I look forward to reading more from you soon!