RAin

Theres rain in my heart

i wish i could pull it apart

but the rain has no end

when its too deep inside your skin

 

 

Author's Note

umm i just decided to put something on my website its not really a good poem i just wrote it in like 10sec.

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

It is a good poem.

The best poem is the writing that reflects
your thoughts and desires at the time it is
written. What we , the reader make of your
poem is another story---the responsibility of
the reader.
I think you are saying you have a sadness within
yourself, sometimes expressed as a storm.
You have trouble disconnecting from this feeling.

A very expressive poem in a few words.

Rated-----100 %

------Eagle Cruagh

[Piikapoka]

Thank you very much. You have really helped me understand that a poem should reflect my desires and not just to make a reader satisfied.