A Walk Amung The Darkness, part one

This is in a series I'm calling the nines purpose this is one of the books imbposting it in parts forgive and grammar or spelling thanks everyone may all your dreams come true

So as I set I feel my veins constricting,my heart racing. Then I start to feel it.feel myself floating away, Becoming nothing. So as I start to leave my aching body. My dark soul rising into purity. I hear a deep cracked voice call my name, "Justin" "Justin". At a instance I'm standing infront of this dark hooded figure. He portrays coldness, with a dark cloud around him. He smells of rotting flesh of death. He speaks with a whisper of madness. Justin he says. For your deeds bring u to me. For u have forsaken your own soul. Your deceit wraps you in a pale darkened state. I know I say to him dropping to my knees. He says you will walk for me by me. Take all u have gave upon your never resting soul. Tears start to pour from my face. "omg" I say to myself, "what have I done", "what is in store for me". He looks up his eyes glow yellow his face is faceless. He reached up and as he touched my shoulder I felt his coldness his never ending pain shoot through me like lightning death. At that moment I go blank. I awake standing at a lady's bed. It's all smokey. I smell smoke. "Hey wake up" I scream as i see the flames licking under the door of her room. "She dosent hear me". "Am I real", "am I dreaming". All the sudden the door exploded, open's with vengeful flames rushing the room. "Hey" I still scream. As I can do nothing but stand their and watch the entire room be saduced by the flames,Then to her bed. She awakes as the flames catch her. Theirs nothing I can do. She screams as tears run down my face. "God help me" "help me please" she screams. At that moment she falls to the floor. I see something coming up from her body. Shes all burnt up as her soul arises. She looks at me. "Does she see me" I think to myself. Then I feel the cold darkness of him. The bringer of death. He's standing beside me."take her" he says. "How I say". Touch her take her pain into take her into you. Oh god I think. So I walk up to her. She stands like a zombie confused and unlifelike. Oh god as I say as I raise my arm to her. I touch her shoulder. Bam it hits me like a ton of bricks. I feel the burning the screaming all of it like acid to my soul. I take her in me with all the emotions I feel. I'm terrified I scream out as my soul feels as if it's tearing into. I drop to my knees. Oh god make it stop make it stop I scream. Release her pure soul but keep the pain the reaper says. I push will all I am and she shoots out of me like a falling star. I see her standing their infront of me. She looks great with a smile of a angel. At that moment a light comes down and takes her in a blink of a eye. Still feeling the pain of her I turn to the reaper of death with black tears pooring from my eyes. Oh god I say how long do I have to do this. He speaks death and says God does not hear you my child of darkness and for eternity of course. I loose it I break to nothing holding my face. I'm balling like a child. Death starts to laugh a deep dark cold laugh. It's only begun my child...

Author's Note

This is a rough draft so I typed it quickly