as my nature falls

My nature falls as water to a river
My design shows it flaws
As my fingers tingle from touching the darkness
Even angels of light love the dark
They love to wrap each other as a blanket of sadness
Stained with the tears of the deafening silenced
To hold to bare the nature of raw distinction of sadness
To drink from the sea of sies
To hold the damage in their hands
Gaze upon it they do
Even with just a look from their pure hearts will destroy the darkness
They gaze upon it with curiosity
For they caint escape it's pureness it's creative distilled desires
For the longing for change is at its peak
Their minds to endless to grasp its simple complexity
It's serenity
It's utter destruction of itself
Yern they do
To feel something if nothing
To be as we are good and bad
Even the light feels wonderence of its lover the dark
It ponders on what it hides
What it feels
The just of it
As my nature falls...

Reviews

[pink elephant]

Thanks for all the comments guys may all yals dreams come true.

[Rachel M Nolan]

This has excellent flow, such a wonderful read.

[Lluvs]

"Even angles of light love the dark" Beautiful poem (:

[pink elephant]

Thank u jesserose Barry much I have a bunch I have not posted yet so I'll put some new ones on tonight but anyway thank u so much

[jesserose99]

Well, I'm glad I checked in on you again, because this is filled with grace. What a lovely piece of work.

[pink elephant]

Thank you pryde glad I liked it

[Pryde Foltz]

A ethereal piece here, Pink. I love ti:)

[pink elephant]

Thank you varry much Juan😊

[kyam]

Wow! What beautiful writing and with such depth, I am so glad I read this! It is so inspiring! So many feelings. Lover of the dark! Distilled desires! Gaze upon it with curiosity! Bravo!!! Kyam

[pink elephant]

Thank u troy your right in your view of this piece thank u for your review. May all ur dreams come true