grown tired

grown tired

A Poem by pink elephant

I've grown tired of this circle of nothingness this longing I keep yet never finding its filling Where does my soul lye at night
Where does my completion begin
Why do my blue eyes of the sky never see what truly is before me
Does this pure Angel forever walk alone
Does my pure divine soul forevermore stand alone shinning for no one
Why do I run this endless journey of my heart
My ears hearing all yet receiving nothing
Why does my mind never stopping never thinking of the one to be seen
As the nature of me blankets me smothering my will
My desires stay lit
Yet never feeding the grace I have it lays full
My inhibitions delicately crying in the wind of my forbidden desires
Why do I lay alone lay cold yet full of life
I've grown tired of this circle of nothingness...

© 2015 pink elephant


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Thank you I'm putting a lot into this I still have a lot to learn but my ears lay open and my eyes seeing my mind constricting so I'm giving my all just takeing a while to go through all of them and redo my mistakes but thank u for seeing my progressions thanks you varry much😊

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like what I am seeing in poetic progression … separating your pieces into individuals lines is much more effective. To the subject manner … seek out zen everyday and everything else will fall into place:)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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pink elephant
pink elephant

brazoria, TX



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I'm a simple country's man who love to write and express I've never went to school or took a course for writing so I am what I am I I enjoy reading all the stuff on here and make like minded friends m.. more..

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