my will

The will to move foward

My head up
My tears frozen
My mind clear
I see the other side flying to me as a great wind of purity comeing unto me
My cares fly as hair in the wind
Worry falls from me
Pain in my veins release from me
My heart strong as iron
My soul lifting as clouds
My fiery as a twister
My will pushes out my passion as a rabid dog longing to bite the bitter cold set forth
Whispers of truths in my ears
My eyes seeing the stars that I reach for
My gols hold clear
Ever changing I am
My smile brightens the world
My love never ending
With a glimpse of a god in my eyes of pure blue glass glowing they are
My will my longing to move forward
I do not fear I am not scared I laugh I scream inside
Let all this go
Move toward the resistance
Push past ur failures
Take ur pain bite it in ur teeth eat it swallow it
Pride of a lion I carry with no regrets
Smile I will with a amazing will to survive to thrive
I live to love and love to live becoming this raw nature of power my will.....

Reviews

[Calamityofgin]

Ahhhh!!! Honey you got stuff!! This is so primal and bestial in sensuality,

my fury as a twister my will pushes out mybite passshions as a rabid dog longing to bite the bitter cold set forth whispers of truths in my ears my eyes seeing the stars that I reach for my gols hold clear ever changing I am my smile brightens the world

God I love that, rabid dog longing to bite the bitter cold, what a hungry desperate feeling. .base and feral will of man over nature.

Raw gripping stuff...yes, we gotta spell passions because, you use it a lot and its erotica, this is to me highly erotic in nature. And a few other things could help this read beautifully.....
Gorgeous!

Love
Jennifer