Just Like Candy

Just Like Candy

A Poem by pinkasylum
"

apples taste as sweet as candy

"


When buds need
drawn sweetness
I pick the juiciest
Red Delicious
from the rarest
fertile ground

© 2011 pinkasylum


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I love to eat the entire apple because to waste just one taste of such sweet flesh would be a crime of passion. You could have marked this sensual as folks like me could so read deeper into your words bud sweetness juiciest fertile see where I am going with this L, lol. Loved it keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago



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pinkasylum
pinkasylum

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A woman taking refuge here from the outside world, colliding images with words, every poem a prism of reflection. I am new to writing, a tender new bud, here to learn, make friends, support and be ins.. more..

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