Perfect Combination

Perfect Combination

A Poem by pinkasylum
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When life gives you lemons ..

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Taste of sour

awakens delightful buds

tempered ovation with sweetness

© 2011 pinkasylum


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pinkasylum
10 words >> When life gives you lemons ..

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Erm I may enter this myself If I can find it but who says lemons only mean bitterness not you or I it seems as you penned the line ~

tempered ovation with sweetness

Nice, love the way you re-wrote this old addage in your own style, keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


You tweaked up the "life gives you lemons..." quote very well!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on June 29, 2011
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pinkasylum
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A woman taking refuge here from the outside world, colliding images with words, every poem a prism of reflection. I am new to writing, a tender new bud, here to learn, make friends, support and be ins.. more..

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