Hawk and Salmon

Poem about hawks and salmon

The hawk is a bird
Brave and mighty
The salmon is a fish
With scales so shiny

The hawk has a call
Like a horn, loud and clear
The salmon is silent,
Like a song no one hears

The hawk has feathers
Dull colored, but soft
The salmon has scales
That light reflects off

The hawk sits on top
Of a tree very tall
It spots any creature
No matter how small

The slmon always returns
To its birthplace,
They travel quite fast
As if it's a race

The hawk may be predator,
The salmon is prey
But they both help each other
In some little way.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Richard Williams]

Hi, this is a nice first poem. Incorporating both hawk and salmon into a poem is very creative. The 4th stanza is very good, and the ending is excellent in thought. I enjoyed reading this poem, keep up the nice work. (1 spelling error: 5th stanza; "slmon"---> "salmon").