Just Because...

Just because...

I make mistakes dosn't mean i'm a bad person

Although some pepole see it that way

I wish they could understand the way I see things too

Life is hard and I give it my best

I try harder everyday

I learn from my mistakes

I put on a fake smile sometimes..

Even know inside i could feel complely  down

I wish people could see

and I wish  people could understand..

I'm not perfict... I make mistakes too!

 

 

Reviews

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

seriously! people judge other people before they even get to know them, and so we just pretend like everything is okay... before you know it they think you have a perfect life!! ha! funny how people are blindly hypocrites, and they criticize you for your wrongs. i can relate to this, which is good.

~may

[cest la vie]

Wow!! What a wonderful lesson you sent to us all in this write.. I love the misspelled words to make the point clearer..Great write here!!

[emmajoy]

Being 'perfict' isnt the be all of life, it's being yourself, learning about yourself. I smiled at the spelling cos you made a point; one little mistake doesnt ruin something, one faded petal doesnt spoil the rose's scent.

The wording and the construction of this is so good, the way you've displayed thoughts in such a special way is really fine.

Thank you for sharing.

[Laura E. Aranda]

Ha! Girl, you are a trip! Man, here I am going through here highlighting words that are DELIBERATELY misspelled and then the light bulb came on

DUH!

What was the title of this poem again!?

Ha!!!!!!

Cheers,lea

[Lyndsay Castro]

YESSSSSS! At nearly ten years your senior, I feel every word and syllable of this poem. I hate to be a drag at all, but being obsessed with English I would be a bad student if I didn't ask you to take another look at spelling/grammar. But this is truly a wonderful poem. Hugs!

[Charles D. Moorer]

The wonderful thing about not being perfect is that each new day gives us the opportunity to continue the quest towards perfection. It takes time for others to see our point of view, you must give them time.

[Emily B]

You are perfect for you. You will learn. You will grow. You will spread your wings and fly so high.

Great job putting your thoughts out there.

[Vampire]

I like this poem, it is very true, there is no perfect person in this world.

[Suelou]

No one is perfect. We all make mistakes. It is the lesson we learnfrom each mistake that counts the most.

[Display Name]

I like the honesty and sincerity of this poem, yes we all make mistakes, but many can't admit that,,, well done.