Saying Goodbye

Saying Goodbye

A Poem by Gypsy
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Might be kinda sad, please check it out!!:)

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    The fatal sky blackened the sun rose. The rise to the set of the sun melted my face burning to ashes. As I rose to the gates of heaven I realize what I leave behind a world of wonder and excitement but I had to leave with no choice. That happens nearly everyday in the sky I lift up. My soul rises my heart is left behind in the sky. Weakened with scrawny bones a body left behind, as the sadness groans to my ear being. My body lifted slowly looking down into the huge world. The gates of heaven are going to do good for me what I deserve I hope. But leaving the world isn't how I want to go to the gates of heaven. Staying, staying, staying I want to stay please, my life as come down to this moment I never wanted this to happen lifted in the sky I am. My soul rises leaving family behind that is what I didn't want to do. Leave leave leave me as the blue sky pass and I am in the clouds. Goodbye as my spirit I wave goodbye to my old life. I love you all my family and my old self,being left behind can't be done I will always be in heart and you know that right

                        





                              GOODBYE!

© 2012 Gypsy


Author's Note

Gypsy
I hope you enjoy this poem because I worked hard for it so enjoy!!!-K

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goobye? wheres the d?


Posted 13 Years Ago


You write your poems like stories, you should format them, it would make it easier to read.........but like I already said still good :O)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I would stay awhile if i were you, till the grey skies pass to reveil a new day.

The poem was indeed kind of sad, but your emotion flowed, well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on December 11, 2010
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Gypsy
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