unmapped.

unmapped.

A Poem by Jo

Sometimes I feel like I’m forging 
roads that don’t exist
to places that stay unmapped
to people who don’t breathe 
to hearts that never beat
to feel something that remains
unnamed.

Like words I never wrote. 

© 2011 Jo


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Interesting read for sure, not too sure about the presentation, I found it a distraction from what was being said, but that is merely me and my preferences your may be different, and that is alright as well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is brilliant! I'm not entirely sure I could explain it yet, but I've never read anything remotely like it. Amazing writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


i really like this. clever is too mild a word for this piece, but i can't come up with a more apt one at the moment. one of those rare poems that i wish i had written.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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