The "Dream World"

I advanced towards the man, along with the people around me.  We didn't have to say anything though because before we could say anything he had already turned towards us.  "Oh!, so you guys are finally awake!" he said, "I was starting to think you were dead!", then he chuckled.  I was the first one to speak,
"So could you maybe, you know tell us where the heck we are?"

Reviews

[David Jae]

A compelling story, although it would have been nice to know the names of your characters. But, it is concise and to the point, which is good.