why

why

A Poem by kaity
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late night bad poem writing.

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Why do we do what we do 
Why do we let ourselves do what we do 
Why do we let other people do what they do 
Why do we 
Why do we let the world go to trash 
And Why do we just sit back 
Why do we, why do we 
Maybe we do what we do because we're scared
Maybe why we're scared is because we do what we do 
If you live were you only do what you do 
And never leave your comfort zone 
You won't understand how doing what 
You do,
We do 
can Get in the way of what we could do

© 2015 kaity


Author's Note

kaity
ignore grammar problems. lol.

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Because we are evil inside and we are to weak to control or stop that evil from getting out.
Thats my answer anyway. I think I understand what you are going for here, but the wording is a little hard to read, I think it would be better read out loud with the proper inflection and that would make it more clear. Good thought-provoking poem. I hope you have your answers by now.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The way you wrote this is unique and very clever. I wouldn't call it bad at all

Posted 9 Years Ago


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